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Tortured Souls

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This was inspired by a daydream...
I do that a bunch!

Hpoefully I'll be able to post more soon, but please tell me what you think?

Is it good? If so, I'll post 3 other stories that I'm not finished yet... :( I'll finish them soon...

But this is my first REAL emotional free verse poem.

And yes, It's about a man who comes home from work, where that day at work he got raped. Yes it's supposed to be like that.
But it's just how one thing that's supposed to be good, Pleasurable, Wonderful and Special, (Yes I mean Sex) can be something so horrible!!

Anyways, Hope you like!
Next: SasuNaru Fanfic!
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EmozLikeSasuke's avatar
This is really good! I love it! It's so sad though... Why was your daydream so sad?